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☆F級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆苗栗分校,Bella吳珞君


Son of the Sun

The yellow beach and sparkling sea.

There was a girl fell into the sea while Chris was playing in the water. So Chris swam to the girl and save her.

“Hey! Wake up! Wake up! Chris said. “Cough! Cough!” the girl threw up the water which she drank in.

“”Are you all right?” Chris asked again. “Who are you? Did you save me from the sea?” the girl asked.

“I’m Chris, and you? What’s wrong with you?” Chris asked. “Lucica, I want to find son of of the son. However, I still can’t find him” Lucica said.

“Who is he? Is he the most important person in you life?” Chris asked. “Yeah! He’ll give me a lot of happiness.” Lucica said.

“I see. Then, can I go with you to find him?” Chris asked. “O.k.” Lucica said. Then Chris and Lucica went to find “Son of the sun.”

On their way, they met a boy named Jack. They asked him “Are you son of the sun?” Jack said, “No, I’m not. You can go to visit Joe. He is a shiny boy. They went to visit Joe after they thanked to Jack.”

On their trip, they had a lot of fun. They played with the foxes by the river, they watched the stone, share jokes to each other and so on.

At the moment, Lucica didn’t think they have to visit Joe. “I don’t want to visit Joe anymore.” Lucica said. “Why?” Chris asked.

“Because he is just beside me.” Lucica said and smiled at him. “Me?” Chris was surprised. “Yeah! I had never felt so happy before I met you. You are my son of the son!”

Finally, Lucica found her “Son of the sun.” Now, look around you, maybe yours is just beside you.


學校名稱:苗栗分校

學生姓名:Bella J.C. Wu (吳珞君)

就讀期數:S215

指導老師:Chrisao C.F. Chrisiu邱巧凡

得獎殊榮:F級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項