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☆E級創作小書比賽 優等作品 ☆大雅分校,Kim陳禾敏

A perfect pet for Jane and Ann

It was a sunny day. Jane and Ann were talking about the animal that they would like to have most of all.

Then, they saw a tall man walking his dog in the park.

It could do many tricks, like sit down and stand up.

He could bow and get slippers for its owner. How smart he is!

The dog stopped next to Jane and Ann. It seemed very friendly. It had two small ears, two big eyes, a small body and four short legs.

Jane and Ann wanted to have such a smart pet, too, so they went to a pet store. They found their favorite pet, a cat, and named it Mimi.

They also practiced many tricks with her every day. Mimi loved to have training courses with them because she thought it was fun to look at them feel proud for her.

After they took Mimi home, they made sure that she always had the best life. She even had her own pink bed.

After Jane and Ann had trained their cat for such a long time, they decided to enter Mimi in an animal contest.

It was the day for the contest. Jane, Ann and Mimi were excited because it was Mimi’s first contest.

Mimi did so well on stage. She danced and counted math, so people were surprised.

However, Mimi didn’t get the first prize. She was second, but Jane and Ann were still proud of her. They said, “It’s ok. You will always be our favorite pet. We can join the contest again next year.”

學校名稱:大雅分校

學生姓名:Kim H.M. Chen (陳禾敏)

就讀期數:S212

指導老師:Vivian C.Y. Chu朱吉雲

得獎殊榮:E級創作小書比賽〝優等〞獎項